RED MEAT veterinary incontinence from the secret files of max cannon
Good to see you again, Dan. Vacation kind to you?
Skip the small talk.
Well, I hit seven cats at twenty bucks apiece, twelve assorted motor vehicles at fifty a pop, eighteen bikes -- I think we agreed on fifteen dollars each...Oh, and I delivered Karen's cat to her at her vacation house -- on eight different days. A nice touch, I thought.
You've done well, my son. So what's that in all...a grand and change, plus fifty more for Karen's cat.
Can I pay you Monday?
Friday, please. This is a franchise, not a charity.
2001-01-08 11:52:04By zenmaster

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9Great twist at the end. Still mulling it over. --VX
9Brilliant..crz
8needed the verbosity, nice twist
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8Superb. -JM
83: Matt is paying for the privilege of torturing Karen
8Very clever, very in-character. -PB
8Wordy but meaty
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7Nice twist and nicely twisted.
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7had me fooled
7Alas, some good strips just have to be ungainly and verbose.
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7I love to see a business expand.
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6nice twist -bbg
6Byzantine?!?! WTF?
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6This, I like.
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6Good start, but panel 2 needs to be cut way down -Cap'n
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5Good twist, but illogical
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5Matt 3 length makes this awkward
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5... I don't see why this would work as a franchise? Why would they get paid?
5Too verbose.
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5I hate to admit it, but a little confusing.
5A little longwinded in the second panel. Matt doesn't really need to give prices
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4"she should pay me, though." -FV
4Dan is leasing out time to torture Karen?
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