RED MEAT Bring me my circumsicsion saw Pt 2 from the secret files of max cannon
Coach, did you dress my son up in an imported English fox suit?
Now see here Mr. Johnson...
Coach, did you send upperclassmen on horseback with dogs to chase my son through the woods?
Umm...ah...well...
Coach, did you leave me and my brand spanking new digital camcorder at home during all this?
Frankly Mr. Johnson, we thought you might headbutt the ref.
2001-01-30 14:50:28By Pirate

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8Haw! - CC
8Repeated Coach adds rhythm to the delivery. DH
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8Better! Much better! -- SG
8*big grin* --TRT
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7Nick 3 makes it work for me. -PB
7+1 for extreme Tedness
7Terrific 3. --VX
7Shit - fantastic up until coach 3.... again!..crz
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7better coach 3 would get +1
7Great, but Coach's last line could be tweaked a tad. Preloggy
7alright, this forgives the crappy Pt 1
7Nick's 3 saves it. -FV
7I like the consistant pace.
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6Idea is right, but the repeated "Coach" doesn't work for me.
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6Coach's last line needs rework, continued comics are tough, but quite promising.
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6better than part1
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5..decent sequel.
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5Dialogue seems a bit clunky.
5Coach #3 is weak -cm
5What? This is just to strange, but has potential.
5tad predictable -bbg
5Saw that coming.
5Last line doesn't work for me.
5Disjointed
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3Shot to the depths on 3
3Why is coach at a loss for words in #2?

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