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| 10 | Yes! Yes! Yes! |
| 9 | God, yes. --VX |
| 9 | -opus |
| 9 | Vintage Earl..crz |
| 9 | A new twist on an old theme. Classic Earl. --TRT |
| 8 | Much better. Only quibble -- make the last panel one sentence |
| 8 | heh, this is sound,. |
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| 8 | You have to kick my ass to make Violent Earl work for me. It's kicked. -PB |
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| 8 | I've a former boss I'd like to introduce Earl to.... --John |
| 8 | Move #2 to #1 and the first part of #3 to #2 -Cap'n |
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| 7 | Better. Lose anymore. |
| 7 | -bbg |
| 7 | Whoooo HoooooooO! |
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| 7 | lose the "anymore" and it goes to 8. Preloggy |
| 7 | That took me a while to get... Very violent in a Corinthian way... |
| 7 | o cruel! Out, vile jelly! I like it with ""s. -RR |
| 7 | much better |
| 6 | "anymore" too much explanation -- THM |
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| 6 | -DB |
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| 6 | Good. #3 should be rewritten, though. |
| 6 | nice. "my boss" doesn't need quotes here, I don't think. |
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| 5 | Wording in 3 needs work. I''ve had bosses like that. |
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| 5 | Better wording would help a ton |
| 5 | There's no U in team, either... DH |
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| 5 | - BFJ - |
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| 5 | blender bender rearender? too violent, but MUCH improved. - gtd |
| 4 | too violent for Earl. Ted or Dan, maybe? -FV |
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