RED MEAT wheeler dealer coldsore healer from the secret files of max cannon
Ok, so what's it going to take to get you into this car today?
C'mon, that's the oldest car dealer's phrase in the world.
No really, what's it going to take?
A lot more than an offer of some candy and seeing a puppy.
2002-02-06 21:11:59By qlewless1

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9My white windowless van broke down this weekend. Not kidding.
9I think Don#1 is a little awkward, but the joke is priceless-pete
8nothing wrong with don's 1, but lose "seeing"
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8hah. I wanna see a puppy..-todcra
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7So misguided... Afg.
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7This could be a bit better with Karen and a modified first balloon for her.
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6Okay I'll give ya a six cos it's your first. Welcome. Got any dope?
6suitable. welcome. - gtd
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6Rework Don's one for +3. And welcome. Vaca
6change Don's #1 to 'oldest trick' (CB)
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6Salesman Vern is a customer tormenter, not a customer molester. -FV
6Clunky phrasing in 3
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6There's a real gem of a strip after fixing Don's #3 and Don's reaction in #1.
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6Don's 3 just doesn't jive with his 1. Other than that, it's a great idea. --VX
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5Need a comma in 2 and a stronger 3 for +1 or more - Spike
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5why don?
4Welcome, but Don's reaction in 1 doesn't make sense if Vern is offering candy
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3This is crap, pure and unadulterated.
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