RED MEAT Penguins rolling off the precipice (Once more with feeling) from the secret files of max cannon
Hey Ted, what were those sirens last night?
The police brought Billy home
What did he do this time?
They caught him stalking around the suburbs with one of my guns.
You must have been pretty pissed off.
Yeah, I told him to keep his head down; the bastards nearly caught me, too.
2002-02-28 18:00:21By Politas

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8An improvement. This is pretty good.
8Seen a lot of good Ted strips in my travels - this is right up there..crz
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7Heh, very much in character, and a pretty funny comic as well.
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7Heh. CH
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6add depth for an improved score (CB)
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6I'm giving this a 6. The unfazed Ted rings good enough in this.
6-ballpn
6it's better with carnage-pete
6Not bad. -PB
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6Much better re-write. - DG
5Slight improvement of the punchline
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5just reads weird to me.
5Man, I'm missing somethin'. --VX
5still a tad rough, but getting better. - gtd
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4It is tough getting started.
4Excessive rewrites are driving this one down. Preloggy
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