RED MEAT touched by an anvil (rewrite) from the secret files of max cannon
I took my grandmother to the park today so she could feed the pigeons.
We weren't there very long before she had to go home.
Just ain't enough of her left to get them pigeons interested.
2002-09-24 14:46:53DELETEDBy Vitamin X

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10perfect Earl; nice tag
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8Yuk. Preloggy
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7Ewww, do pigeons eat people? -JM
7"She had to go home" jars with #3. Reword for bonus.
7I like the tag
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7clean this up a little and this will be golden
7i liked maxs better
6Heh. -PB
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6.stand by for a plethora of rewrties
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6didn't see that one coming.
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6Now delete this one. No double-dipping comics.
5Earl's wording doesn't make sense once you know Grandma is dead.
5heh. -todcra
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4Poor wording in #1 and #2 don't match the punchline.
1Delete your comic if you want to post a rewrite

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