RED MEAT Pico de Leche from the secret files of max cannon
Milkman Dan, I have no choice but to fire you.
You can't fire me, I quit!
You can't quit, you're rehired!
You can't rehire me, I'm an alcoholic!
2000-11-08 21:04:19By ChickenCow

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10I'm gonna try this some time. --VX
9Sketch!
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9Wonderful! The flow is perfect. Very witty. -IF
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8GOOD banter. Afg.
7Heh. It's absurd and good.
7This reads like (the good portion of) Aaron Sorkin dialogue
7I love this...don't ask me why.
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7+2 for Dan 3
7This makes no sense! It's great!
7Rapid-fire dialogue almost "West Wing"-esque. -Cap'n
7+1 for brevity of wit
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6oddly compelling -bbg
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6Wow, I was way harsh on this before. This isn't really that bad at all
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5Very good premise hurt badly by a weak last line.
5there must be a better ending
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3Interesting...but not good.
3Neither Meaty nor all that funny. -PB
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3silly
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