bloddy birdbath of babylon

I gotta friend who is a line cook down at the old diner.

He tells me that when a customer makes him real real mad, he just spits in their food.

I decided I was gonna try that at my work and boy is that guy gonna be mad when finds out I spit in his lawn that he paid me ten dollars to rake.

By bongthegong
Score: -0.65

70.38Lovely twist. Very much in character. --VX
5-0.77A bit wordy, but a good idea.
5-1.00Panel 3 is too wordy. -T.
3-1.37#3 too long.
4-1.983rd panel a little clunky. Pre